Blood Circle Reunion, so-called / I call out to you but there is no warmth of contact / through the wall between us it is pointless / I try to embrace you, but your eyes are dulled with deceit / you turn you drift / you walk away lost within your own dreamsong / Later you dance and float / I see you wrapped in mystifying colour / I try to catch you rush through / and ignore this barren terrain, blind / myself so that numbed and soulless / I can get through the pain immune to sadness / heal our atrophied hearts / avulsion abandoned closeness / forever
nb – a ‘Cleave’ poem – read normally line by line or left column, right column
I had never, ever heard of a “cleave poem” until now, with your poignant poem about the desire to revive love that seems to have died. The form of the poem is very fitting for the topic of these two people who are also “cleaved” apart. It’s one thing when two people break apart; it’s another when one turns totally cold and deceitful, and yet the other can still see the lingering “mystifying colour.” I love that expression–“mystifying colour”–as though one is still seeing the other in a romantic way, despite what has happened.
Thanks Bonnie – yes, an interesting form – I first saw it on this website – http://cleavepoetry.wordpress.com/what-is-cleave-poetry/ (no longer updated)
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